July’s slogan with bonus poetry

This poem was originally destined to get translated and passed off as a Chinese poem, but I just read a chapter on real Chinese poetry and realized this one never had a chance. Still, here’s a China-provoked bit of poetry, the quality being about where it was when I last wrote a poem… in junior high. No title yet; I’m taking suggestions:

i’m drinking some Chinese tea
that i’ve never drank before
it tastes like our old backyard in summer
(minus the dog poo)
happy memories

4:11pm 25 July 2007

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“Beautify the sky tower, everyone has responsibility,
make better the environment, everyone benefits!”

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美化天塔,人人有责,优化环境,人人受益!
měi huà tiān tǎ, rén rén yǒu zé, yōu huà huán jìng, rén rén shòu yì !

The “sky tower” is called the “TV Tower” in English, but I don’t know why. It’s the most prominent landmark in Tianjin, and keeps us from getting lost a lot (on blue-sky days, anyway). There’s an artificial lake around it and some park areas. At night it’s a popular place for dog-walking, roller-blading, sidewalk calligraphy, musical exercise, dancing, and snogging in every available shadow. We can see it from our “backyard.”

8 thoughts on “July’s slogan with bonus poetry”

  1. man, poetry is hard. I couldn’t’ decide between between dog “poo,” “poop,” or “doo.” What did we used to call it at the old house?

  2. I don’t remember sampling the dog poop.. I do remember eating dirty carrots and drinking from the hose after kootney. Those flavours were totally revisited while reading your poem. I was touched. Thanks.

  3. actually, your last attempt at poetry wasn’t quite as far back as jr. high, and I’d have to say it was much better than this one.:D Of course, it was for me…so maybe I’m biased!

  4. um, I thought we weren’t going to mention those poems to the rest of the family…

    just kidding.

    What no titles?

    i hope the hose didn’t taste any different on account of Kootney. i don’t rember sampling dog poop either, but it was there and all part of the experience, you know?

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